Alter Ora chap1p3

So, page 3 of chapter 1. Trying to establish more of a relationship between the characters. Lots of work and still tons of mistakes, but I'm learning. Also, FYI: This font is actually NOT comic sans... but it's apparently so close to it that I will eventually change it altogether, I think. I just can't find the nice comic-y one free, lol. Anyway, tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it!

(Look, Aiden's got bishieflakes!)

COMMENTS ARE APPRECIATED, DAMNIT. lol

(markers and photoshop)

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